英语高考作文范文

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英语高考作文

英语高考作文篇1

高考英语作文技巧

要善于模仿

一些同学的办法往往是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,真正的模仿重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在高考写作中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行:“The bicycle is very popular in China for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”。如果要表示“总是能够”的概念,很多同学提笔就会写can always,但理想的句子应该是用双重否定表示强烈的肯定,用never fail to。

要灵活变通

在批改过上万份同学们英语作文中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,写英文作文,一定要有决心把它 写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议 的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“What is it made of”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“It is made of Miss Hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

要细心观察

注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。比如在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn’t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把“since”“because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用“furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

要心有全局

英文写作如果结构意识良好,应试写作就简化成为一个填空的过程了,适当地填入观点、素材,文章就自然而然立起来了。

英语高考作文篇2

分数并不等于知识, 班主任对我说,因为他希望我们能够掌握所有需要了解的知识。我并没有把他的话放心上,因为我觉得分数是最重要的。有一天,老师教了我们一些知识,然后就让我们考试。只要通过了考试才能去做实验。我瞎猜猜得了很高分。我很高兴,但是悲剧也就发生了。因为知识不牢固而导致了一个小爆炸。我被吓到了,也终于明白了那句话, 分数并不等于知识。

When I was seven,I started learning English.I played games and sang English songs with other children.Sometimes,I watched English cartoons.It's funny.Then I discovered the beauty of the language,and began my colorful dream in the English world.

I hope I can travel around the world someday.I want to go to America to visit Washington,because my cousin is over there.Of course,I want to go to London too,because England is where English language developed.If I can ride my bike in Cambridge University,I will be very happy.

I hope I can speak English with everyone in the world.Also I'll introduce China to them,such as the Great Wall,and the gardens in Suzhou.I will teaching people of the world about the beautiful language of our country.

I like the English language.To learn English is wonderful.I once wanted to be an English teacher.I also like Chinese literature.When I was really young, I was able to remember lots of poems.I also wanted to be a teacher of Chinese.Now I think that both of my dreams can come true:I will be able to use English to teach foreign friends Chinese and share Chinese culture with them.So that more and more people will be able to get to know the 5000 years' history culture,and the prosperity of our great China.

My future is not a dream.I am confident that it will come true.

我在七岁的时候开始学习英语。我和其他孩子一起玩游戏,唱英文歌曲。有时,我看英语卡通片。这很有趣。然后我发现了美丽的语言,开始了我在英语世界的五彩缤纷的梦。

我希望有一天我能环游世界。我想去美国访问华盛顿,因为我的表哥是在那里。当然,我也想去伦敦,因为英格兰是英语语言的起源。如果我可以骑我的自行车去剑桥大学,我会很高兴的。

我希望我能和世界上的每个人都说英语。我也会向他们介绍中国,如长城,和在苏州的园林。我会教全世界的人我们国家的美丽的语言。

我喜欢英语。学习英语真是太好了。我曾经想成为一名英语老师。我也喜欢中国文学。当我还年轻的时候,我能记住大量的诗歌。我还想成为一名中文教师。现在我认为我的梦想可以成真:我将能够用英语教外国朋友中文并与他们分享中国文化。所以,更多的人将能够了解我们伟大中国5000年的历史,文化,和繁荣。

我的未来不是梦。我相信它会成真。

Nowadays Intemet is very popular all over the world, especially in some big cities. Do you know when the Intemet was first established? Built in 1960s, the Internet was a crude network of a few computers which shared information. If one of the computers broke down, the whole networks would be unable to work, causing continual problems. At first, just the government had access to the Internet, using it for communications among different branches. However, by 1970s the Internet had been used in universities, banks, and hospitals. At the beginning of 1990s computers became affordable for common people and this affordability increased the use of the Internet by people,

It is said that each day tens of millions of people log off, making it the most important part of people's life.

现在因特网在世界范围内非常流行,特,别是一些大城市更是如此。你知道因特网是在什么时候建立的吗?建立在二十世纪六十年代的因特网是少许计算机分享信息的原始网络。如果一台计算机坏了,整个计算机网络就停止工作,这带来了一系列的问题。最初只是政府利用因特网在不同的分支机构间交流。然而,到了二十世纪七十年代,因特网开始被用于大学、银行和医院。到了二十世纪九十年代初,计算机对大众来说已经负担得起了,因此因特网的使用也随之增加。

据说,每天使用互联网的人超过几百万,它已成为人们生活中最重要的一部分。

Internet was first established in 1960s. At that time, the computer was both large and expensive and the networks were unable to work well. If one of the computers broke down, the whole networks would be unable to work.

At first, the Intemet was just used by the government. By 1970s, it had been used in universities, banks and hospitals. At the beginning of 1990s,computers became both cheaper and easier to operate. Now it is very convenient to log on the Intemet.

It is said that each day tens of millions of people log on the Internet. Sending e-mails is becoming more and more popular.

The Intemet has become the most important part of people's life.

互联网首建于二十世纪六十年代。那时,计算机又大又贵,计算机网络也不能很好地工作。如果网络中一台计算机坏了,整个网络就会停止运作。

起初,互联网只由政府使用。到二十世纪七十年代,一些大学、医院和银行也开始使用互联网。二十世纪九十年代初,计算机价格下降,也更容易操作了。现在上网很方便了。

据说,每天使用互联网的人超过几百万。发电子邮件也越来越普遍。

互联网已成为人们生活中最重要的一部分。

Recently, I read a fairy story book, Little Prince. This book tells the adventurous experiences of little prince from his planet to the earth. Little prince comes from the outer space and he is hurt by a rose. So he leaves there and travels into space. He comes to the earth and be the friend of a fox. The fox tells his secret to little prince and he helps a pilot in the desert. In the end, he dies under the help of a snake and his soul goes back to his planet. This book is very interesting and teaches me a lot. I like little price adventures. He teaches me to be honest and love others. All of us should never loss the pureness of childhood.

最近,我读了一本童话书,《小王子》。这本书主要讲述了小王子从他的星球来到地球的冒险故事。小王子来自外太空的一个小星球上,在他被一朵玫瑰伤害之后,他离开了自己的星球开始遨游太空。他来到了地球并且和一只狐狸成为了好朋友。狐狸把自己的一个秘密告诉了小王子,小王子用这个秘密在沙漠里帮助了一个飞行员。最后,他在蛇的帮助下死去,心灵重新回到了他的星球上。这本书很有趣,也教会了我很多。我喜欢小王子的冒险。他告诉了我要诚实,要去爱其他的人和事物。我们都不应该失去童年时候的纯真。

What is language for? Some people seem to think it’s for practising grammar rules and learning lists of words — the longer the words the better. That’s wrong. Language is for the exchange of ideas, for communication.

The way to learn a language is to practise speaking it as often as possible. A great man once said it is necessary to drill as much as possible, and the more you apply it in real situations, the more natural it will become. Learning any language takes a lot of effort. But don’t give up.①Relax! Be patient and enjoy yourself. Learning foreign languages should be fun. Rome wasn’t built in a day. Work harder and practise more. Your hardworking will be rewarded by God one day. God is equal to everyone!

Use a dictionary and grammar guide constantly. Keep a small English dictionary with you at all time. When you see a new word, look it up. Think about the word — use it, in your mind, in a sentence. Try to think in English whenever possible. When you see something, think of the English word of it; then think about the word in a sentence. Practise tenses as much as possible. When you learn a new verb, learn its various forms. I would also like to learn more about the culture behind the language. When you understand the cultural background, you can better use the language.行文点评

英语高考作文篇3

Tourism in China

Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

【译文】

中国旅游

最近几年,在中国的趋势,旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为,约47%城镇居民定期作出旅行,28%的农村居民,也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示,更多的人在旅游有兴趣,并会在将来加入军队。

英语高考作文篇4

某校开展"研究性学习",要求学生设计一下未来的居室.下面请以"My Dream House"为题,描述你设计的居室.内容要点如下:

我梦中的住房将是建在海边的一幢别墅.前后有两个庭院,前面是一个四季都开满鲜花的花园,后面是一个游泳池,因为我的家人喜欢游泳.

第一层进门有一个大厅,大厅的右边有一个客厅,平时大家可以在这里放松休息,看电视,娱乐等.左边有个电脑房,还有一毡属于我的书房.

第二层有6间卧室,每一间卧室都有浴室.

别墅配有现代化设备,如电脑控制的安全报警器,电梯,可视电话,自动门等.

参考词汇: 书房study 安全报警器security alarm 可视电话vision phone

自动门automatic

My dream house is a villa which lies on the coast. There are two yards in the villa. The front yard is a garden with many beautiful flowers an plants for the four seasons. There is a swimming pool in the back yard, as my family are fond of swimming. On the first floor, there is a big hall when you enter the gate. On the right of the hall is a sitting room, there we can relax, have a rest, watch TV and enjoy entertainments. On the left there is a computer room and a study belonging to me. On the second floor, there are six bedrooms with bathrooms. The villa will be equipped with the modern equipment, such as security alarms controlled by computers, vision phones, lifts an automatic doors. Well, that is my dream house.

我梦想中的房子是建在海边的一幢别墅。有两个别墅庭院。前院是一个有很多美丽的花的植物在四个季节的花园。后院有一个游泳池,因为我的家人喜欢游泳。在一楼,有一个大厅,当你进入大门。在大厅的右边是客厅,在那里我们可以放松,休息,看电视,享受娱乐。在左边有一个电脑室和一个属于我的书房。在二楼,有六间卧室和浴室。别墅配有现代化设备,如电脑控制的安全报警器,可视电话,电梯和自动门。嗯,那是我梦想中的房子。

高考英语满分作文2

The table above revealed an overall picture of employment satisfaction. Based upon the data of the table, most people under 40 are unclear or dissatisfied with their job, and 64% of those between 40 to 50, are not satisfied and no one feel satisfied at all. For people over 50, the degree of satisfaction largely exceeds the other groups, amounting to 40%.

上面的表格显示了一个整体的就业满意度。根据表格的数据,40岁以下的人不清楚或不满意他们的工作,和40的人在64%到50之间,不满意,没有人觉得满意。对于50岁以上的人,其满意度在很大程度上超过了其他群体,达40%。

Such difference may be rooted in the following reasons. First, middle-aged people face more pressure to support the family, both the children and the senior, so that they neglect to enjoy in work. Second, the senior citizens has developed a lot in personality, so they are more prone to see the optimistic aspects of the work. Last, the conclusion that the current society patterns pose more challenges to the middle aged group under 50.

这种差异可能是植根于以下原因。首先,中年人面临着更多的压力,以支持家庭,无论是孩子和老年人,使他们忽视了享受工作。二、老年人的性格已经发展了很多,所以他们更倾向于看到工作中乐观的一面。最后,结论认为,当前社会形态对中老年群体的挑战是50岁以下的。

To sum up, the senior citizens enjoys more content than the young and middle-aged people under 50.

总的来说,老年人比年轻人和中年人有50岁以上的内容。

高考英语满分作文3

Today is my grandpa's birthday. Our family went back to my grandpa's home in the morning. We got together to have a big family dinner to celebrate his birthady. We bought a big birthday cake and gave some presents to my grandpa.

In the afternoon, we went to the park to go boating. We had a good time. My grandpa had a nice time on his birthday.

今天是爷爷的生日。我们全家早晨回到爷爷家。我们举行了一个大型家庭聚会来庆祝他的生日。我们买了一个大生日蛋糕,并且送给爷爷一些礼物。

在下午,我们去公园划船。我们玩得很开心。我爷爷过了一个愉快的生日。

高考英语满分作文4

My Dream Home in the Dream Neighbourhood 我梦想中的梦中之家

My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It has two floors. There is a beautiful garden in front of my house. The garden is full of different kinds of flowers. I can always smell these nice flowers and water them. There are many rooms in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a dining room, a living room and a bathroom. On the first floor, there are six bedrooms. There is also a big balcony on the first floor. I can look out at the hill and trees on the balcony. My dream home is in a very great neighbourhood. The neighbourhood is very big and the neighbours are kind to each other. There are many volunteers in my neighbourhood. Some of them are doctors, so they can take good care of the sick people. If there is something wrong with your things , the engineers here can help you fix them. When you have any problem with your study, the college students will help you. They often help the old clean their houses and do some shopping.

我梦想的家是一座山的山脚下。它有2层。我的房子前面有一个漂亮的花园。花园里有各种各样的花。我总能闻到这些漂亮的花和水的味道。我家有许多房间。在地下,有一个厨房,一个餐厅,一个客厅和一个浴室。在一楼,有六间卧室。一楼还有一个大阳台。我可以在阳台上看山和树。我的梦想是在一个非常大的街区。邻里之间是非常大的,邻居都很友善。有许多志愿者在我的附近。他们中的一些是医生,所以他们可以很好地照顾病人。如果你的东西有问题,工程师们可以帮助你解决问题。当你的学习有什么问题,大学生会帮助你。他们经常帮他们打扫房子,做些购物。

高考英语满分作文5

坚持你的梦想 Hold to Your Dreams

坚持你的梦想 提纲:1.坚持梦想才有可能实现它。2.举例说明。

Hold to Your Dreams

Everyone has his dreams, but not all these dreams can come true. People give up their dreams for this or that reason. Those whose dreams become true have at least one thing in common, that is, they always hold fast to their dreams.

坚持你的梦想

每个人都有自己的梦想,但并非所有的梦想都能实现。人们放弃了他们的梦想,因为这个或那个原因。那些梦想成真的人至少有一个共同点,就是他们总是紧紧抓住梦想。

Marie Curie, a famous scientist, has set a good example. In 1898, Marie found a new element in the pitchblende. In order to prove her discovery, she must get it and show it to the world. Then to get the new element became her dream and goal of her life. After four years'' hard work and refinement of tons of pitchblende, Marie and her hus-band at last saw the dim blue light of the new element -- radium. Her dream had come true. There are many other examples. Just around us, for instance, the athletes who gain the gold medals, the artists who are popular with the public, and even the students who enter tile university after years of hard study and preparation, are all dream-holders.

Hold fast to your dreams, no matter how big or small they are. The path to dreams may not be smooth and wide, even some sacrifices are needed, but hold on to the end, you ,sill find there is no greater happiness than making your dream come true.

居里玛丽,一位著名的科学家,已经树立了一个好榜样。1898,玛丽发现沥青铀矿中的一个新的元素。为了证明她的发现,她必须得到它,并显示它的世界。然后,让新的元素成为她的梦想和她的生活目标。经过四年的艰苦工作,细化成吨的沥青铀矿,玛丽和她的丈夫最后看见昏暗的蓝色光的新元素——镭。她的梦想成真了。还有许多其他的例子。就在我们身边,例如,获得金牌的运动员们,那些在公众中很受欢迎的艺术家,甚至是那些在经过多年的努力学习和准备之后进入大学的学生们,都是有梦想的人。

紧紧抓住你的梦想,不管他们有多大。通往梦想的道路可能并不平坦,甚至有些牺牲是必要的,但坚持到底,你,你,你的梦想是没有更大的幸福比让你的梦想成真。

高考英语满分作文6

Decisions after Graduation

毕业后的决定

Recently, there has been a growing concern among the public over the topic of the choice after graduation. As is described in the picture, a group of graduation is facing various roads such as: searching for jobs, pursuing further study, going abroad and entrepreneurship. The picture intends to convey to us this message: As adults, college students have to make decisions about their future life.

最近,有一个日益关注的话题,在公众之间的选择毕业后。正如图片中所描述的那样,一组毕业就面临着各种道路,如:寻找工作,追求更深入的研究,去国外创业。这张照片传达给我们这个信息:作为成年人,大学生必须做出决定他们将来的生活。

After graduation, college students have to make decisions about their future life. For those who are eager to become economically independent and to put into practice what they have learned in college, taking a job or doing poineeringwork will be both satisfying and rewarding. Getting established as a bread-winner after graduation is their main desire. By contrast, those who want to take advantage of the favorable conditions in college, however, will try to enroll in graduate programs inside or outside. For them, a Master's degree or even a Doctoral degree represents a much more ambitious goal than a bachelor's degree. In the same way, their lifetime success and interest lies more in academic achievements than in making money.

大学毕业后,大学生必须对自己的未来生活做出决定。对于那些渴望成为经济独立和实践他们所学到的东西在大学,找工作或做poineeringwork将满足和奖励。在毕业后作为面包的获得者是他们的主要愿望。相比之下,那些想利用大学的有利条件的人,却会尝试在内部或外部注册研究生课程。对他们,一个硕士学位,甚至一个博士学位代表了一个更宏伟的目标比学士学位。同样,他们的一生成功和兴趣在于学术成就,而不是赚钱。

As far as I am concerned, it is sensible that we should take a rational attitude towards the decisive choice. For the part of my own, getting a higher degree abroad has long been my dream. This is based on my belief that I should do more research and learn more while I am still young.

英语高考作文篇5

Though Sunday is set aside as a day for rest, we ought to devise some .good ways of spending it.

Firstly, we should review what we have learned during the past week. "One will get something new in looking over one"s old studies" Is a very wise saying. If we do not fully understand what we have been taught in the week, how can we expect to understand next week"s lessons?

Secondly, to increase our knowledge, we should read on Sundays, those books,newspaper and magazines that are not in our regular curriculum. That will do us good.

The two ways of spending Sundays will surely do anyone good if he carries them out faithfully and persistently.

如何度过星期天

虽然星期天是供大家休闲娱乐的一天,但我们还是可以想出很多好办法来度过这一天。

首先,我们可以复习上周所学的内容,“温故而知新”这是非常明智的谚语。如果我们连本周所学的知识都不能完全消化,那又怎能掌搔好下一周的知识呢?

其次,为了提高我们的知识水平,我们可在星期天阅读课外书籍、报纸、杂志,虽然不是我们的正规功课,但是对我们很有用。

英语高考作文篇6

今天是您休息的日子,让我们来照顾您。母亲节快乐。

We will try to make this your best Mother's Day ever.

我们将努力使今天成为您过得最愉快的母亲节。

On this day we honor you, dear mother.

亲爱的妈妈,我们向您致敬。

Where would we be without you, mom?

妈妈,没有您我们将流落何方呢?

On this day we all sit back and think about how much our mothers do for us.

在这一天,我们将会抽空休息一下,想想妈妈们帮我们做了多少事。

I've tried many times to tell you, but I'll say it again: I love you mother.

我已经告诉您许多次了,但是我将再说一次:我爱您,妈妈。

Though it is hard to tell you sometimes, I do love you dearly, mom.

虽然有时要告诉您并不太容易,但是我真的非常爱您,妈妈。

We will try to make this your best Mother’s Day ever.

我们将努力使今天成为您过得最愉快的母亲节.

我也许并不常挂在嘴上,但我真正爱您。

There are little things that I should have said and done to show my gratitude, but it is appreciated what you do.

尽管我为表示谢意所说的和所做的都那么少,但同样也是表达对您所做一切的感激之情。

I don't take the time to tell you this often, but I love you, mom.

虽然我经常没有时间告诉您,但我真的爱您,妈妈。

Sometimes I cry and make you sigh, but you know that I love you so.

有时候我哭泣而使您叹息,但您却知道,我是如此地爱您。

To mother on Mother's Day: Thank you for all of the wonderful things that you h ave done for me.

母亲节给妈妈:谢谢您为我做了那么多奇妙的事。

Today is your day to relax and let us take care of you. Happy Mother’s Day.

今天是您休息的日子,让我们来照顾您.母亲节快乐.

On this day we honor you, dear mother.

亲爱的妈妈,我们向您致敬.

更多英语写作材料共享:

1.2015高考英语作文素材:母亲节祝福语

2.2015高考英语写作素材:关于母亲节的资料

3.2015高考英语作文素材:母亲节贺卡祝福语英文版

英语高考作文篇7

A snake is a long and thin animal that lives in grass or other dark places. It has no legs or feet, but can move very fast on its stomach. Snakes usually have green,yellow or black skins, which make it difficult for their enemies to find them.Some kinds of snakes live in water. They can swim as freely as fish.

Snakes are cold-blooded animals. They take many things as food, such as mice, sparrows, frogs, birds'eggs, pests and so on. As snakes are dreadfullooking, people are afraid of them.

In fact, snakes are not as dreadful as they look. They can help us to kill mice and pests. They can provide us with delicious meat. Their blood is a good drink.Poisonous snakes are especially useful. We can make valuable drugs with them.

蛇是生长在草地或其他黑暗地方的又长又瘦的小动物,它没有腿脚,但却可以靠腹部快速移动。蛇的皮肤通常是绿色、黄色或黑色的,这使得它们不易被敌人发现。有些蛇生活在水中,能像鱼儿一样自由自在地游来游去。

蛇是冷血动物;它们以许多东西为食,如老鼠、麻雀、青蛙、鸟蛋、害虫等;因为蛇样子可怕,人们大多怕它。

事实上,蛇并不像看起来那样可怕,它们帮我们捕杀老鼠和害虫,并可以提供可口的肉食,它的血液可制成上等口服液。毒蛇特别有用,我们可以用它们制药。

英语高考作文篇8

书面表达一直是高考英语的重头戏,综观2014高考18套英语试卷,书面表达不外乎有以下六种形式:半开放性作文,开放性作文,看图作文,提纲类作文,读写任务型作文,应用文。

在《江苏省2014年高考考试说明》中,书面表达示例部分多了读写任务作文,这一作文类型在《江苏省2013年高考考试说明》上是没有的。当时就有专家预测:2014江苏高考英语写作要求必然出现变化。果然,今年江苏高考英语考查了读写任务型写作。

读写任务型作文中要求先用约30个词归纳所提供文章的大意,再用约120个词就这一事件发表自己的观点。两部分看似关系不大,其实前一部分的归纳大意是事实的提炼,它和后一部分的发表观点有着密切的联系;看起来好像容易写,但事实上思维如果放不开,会觉得无话可写,更写不出出彩的文章。如何才能较好地完成这样的书面表达呢?

一、归纳文章大意

根据文本内容,文章一般分为三类:叙事类、论述类和说明类。

1、叙事类文章的内容包括“主题、情节和主旨”三个方面,其中情节是主要部分,“主题”和“主旨”有时藏于“情节”之中。但在写摘要时,不能仅仅写情节,必要时要点出“主题”和“主旨”。叙事类文章通常用what-who-when-where-how-why的方法去总结和串联文章的大意,这几个要素有时全有,有时只有一部分。用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么,要省去其中的细节,不要拖泥带水。

2、议论文的内容包括“观点、论据、结论”三个方面,所以议论文的摘要就是把这三个方面说清楚。议论文的主体部分是论证的过程,论据占有很大的部分,但在写摘要的时候,不需要详写论证的过程,因为它有很多细节信息,而细节信息是写摘要所应该剔除的,所以议论文的摘要应当将“观点、论据、结论”三个方面同等对待。通常在文章的首段或末段中找出主题句;在文章的主体部分中找论据或事例。需要注意的是概括大意只是概括文章作者的观点,而不是你的观点,所以一定要客观地陈述文章的观点,不能添加或转变。

3、说明性或描述性短文是用概括的文字来说明某种现象。如阅读材料是一个故事,应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么,不能拖泥带水,而且最好讲述该故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理。

二、发表自己观点。

读写任务型作文要求将阅读与写作有机地结合,通过阅读所给材料,对信息进行加工,并结合积累的相关知识,按照任务要求谋篇布局,完成写作任务。发表观点即表示作文属于议论文范畴,即使用一般现在时和第三人称。要特别注意思想的辩证性,看待问题要一分为二,不能绝对化。要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,也要使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。以2014年江苏卷为例,卷面要求是:

【写作内容】

1.用约 30 个单词写出上文概要;

2.用约 120 个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:

(1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇;

(2)用 2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

【写作要求】

1.可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据;

2.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;

3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

4.不必写标题。

解题思路为:

1、认真审题,领悟题意

用约 120 个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:

(1)表明支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇的态度;

(2)用 2- 3个理由即论据支撑自己的观点,要摆事实,讲道理。

根据写作内容确立以下要点:

①文体:议论文

②人称:第一人称

③时态:一般现在时(主体时态)、一般过去时(“经历”)

2、整理要点,布局谋篇

在明确写作要求和写作内容后,不要急于动笔写作。从整体上把握文章的结构,划分文章的段落,理清文章的层次。如这篇文章我们可以把主体部分直接按照写作内容中的两个点分成三段。这样阅卷老师一眼就能看出你是否把要点写全。此外,第二段的笔墨分配要有机平衡,不能光用理论也需要事实论据。

3、组织材料,充分论证

(1)开门见山,简洁明了

由第一步分析可知,本文是议论文,要求我们首先表明自己的认识。可以用一句话概括目前英语词汇使用的普遍性及大家在讨论汉语词典是否需要收集英语词汇。然后直接阐述自己对此事的观点

(2)收集材料,逐步论述

写作要求中提到:阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句。那么,在材料中查看有无可以利用的论点、论据后,再用自己的话语进行归纳总结,用以充实文章的内容,从而达到移花接木的效果。如原文中有:English words and expressions like these are getting popular.They have already become part of our daily language.可以转述为As the number of English learners is on the rise,it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.要求说明理由和提供论据,那么,可以阐述事实:Most people nowadays use “IT” instead of its translation “xinxi jishu.”也可以阐述其他国家的做法,如In English,there are many words borrowed from Latin,French,or even Chinese.还可以从自身的做法出发,汉语曾经引进过日语,如Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages,say,“ganbu” or “minzhu” from Japanese.从这几个方面出发,就能将论据整理得清晰全面而又有说服力了。

4、勘误润色,锦上添花

打好草稿后,需要认真复查,尽可能减少失误。检查可从以下几个方面入手:时态、语态是否正确,主谓是否一致,句子结构是否完整,词语搭配是否恰当,单词拼写是否有误,标点符号是否准确等。

按照试题的评分标准,除了概括的准确性、语言的规范性、内容的合适性外,还必须注意篇章的连贯性。因此,在完成整篇文章的写作后,还可以在句与句之间、段与段之间增加合适的连接词或过渡性的词、短语或句子可以用Thus,but,however,in fact,generally,as to me等词过渡。总之,只要读来顺畅、自然就可以了。此外,句式的表达式尽量多样化,语言尽量地道化,不要使用汉语式的英语。

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