高考英语全国卷中祝贺/福信写作导练

一、文体概述

祝贺/祝福信是指在日常生活中，你得知同学或朋友考试取得好成绩、竞赛获奖、考上大学等或过新年、重大及特殊节日时，给对方祝贺/祝福的信件。写信的语言应做到真诚、自然和亲切。通常包括以下内容：说明事由并表明自己的衷心祝贺展开评论事件，赞扬被祝贺人过去的努力及优点等表达自己的祝愿。

二、必备短语

1. Congratulations on... 恭喜/祝贺……

2. come true 实现/成真

3. be delighted to learn that... 很高兴得知……

4. express my congratulations on... 表达我对……的祝贺

5. feel very happy for you（r）... 为你……感到非常高兴

6. quite an exciting news 相当令人振奋的消息

7. owing to... 因为……

8. You deserve it. 这是你实至名归。

9. achieve the goal实现目标

10. win the first place 赢得第一名

三、套用句式

1. It’s wonderful to know that you have achieved the goal you set for yourself.知道你实现了自己定下的目标，真是太好了。

2. It is the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.这是很久以来我听过的最令人兴奋的消息。

3. I am delighted to learn that you have won the first place in the English speech contest.获知你在英语演讲比赛中荣获第一名我很开心。

4. I am writing to express my congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination.我写这封信是为了表达我对你高考获胜的祝贺。

5. I wish you all possible joy and happiness in the world. 祝你开心幸福。

四、习作修改 下列习作中共有10处错误，每句最多两处，请改正。

Dear Sir/Madam，

Greetings from China！

I’m Li Hua， a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover when I was a child. About three years ago I am delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth for her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watched her grow on your website. Now that she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish him a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard works， because which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and health life in the US.

By the way， could I have a photo of Sulin taking on her third birthday？ Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly，

Li Hua

五、n堂练习

假设你是李华，来自美国的交流生Peter 在你班学习半年，与你成为了好朋友。目前，他即将学成回国，请你用英语给他写一篇临别留言。要点包括：

1. 祝贺Peter学习汉语取得的成绩；

2. 取得成绩的原因；

3. 你们的友谊和对他的祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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六、课外作业

假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter给你发来一封邮件，告诉你他被推选为学校篮球队队长。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。要点包括：

1. 对他表示祝贺；

2. 你对此事的看法；

3. 对他的祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以m当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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参考答案与范文

习作修改

本篇是熊猫爱好者李华，给远在美国的大熊猫一家写的祝福信。

1. whensince 主句出现了现在完成时，应将when改成since，表示“自从我小时候”起持续到现在。

2. amwas 由three years ago可知，用一般过去时。

3. forto 表示“分娩，生产”，为give birth to。

4. watchedwatching 因watch这个动作是由主语I发出，故改watched为watching。

5. that 意思是“她”现在将三岁，而非“既然”她将三岁，故去掉that。

6. himher 上文熊猫是用she代替，上下文应指代一致。

7. workswork 表示“工作”，work为不可数名词，用原形。

8. because 后加of 引导非限制性定语从句，which指代的是hard work，为名词，应该用because of。

9. healthhealthy 修饰名词life应用形容词。

10. takingtaken 此处take与photo是被动关系，应用过去分词形式。

课堂练习

Dear Peter，

I feel delighted that you have achieved your goal. I would like to express my congratulations on your achievement.

It is excellent of you to get such a high mark in the Chinese test， for after all you have just been staying with us for only six months. You are always diligent and active， which is vital for Chinese learning. Moreover， your great interest in reading enables you to have a good memory for Chinese characters. So you deserve it.

Still I know it’s time for us to say goodbye. I will recall those beautiful days we spend together and help each other. I have thousands of blessings for you. Wish you all possible joy！

Yours truly，

Li Hua

课外作业

Dear Peter，

I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the leader of your school basketball team. This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of you. Please accept my most sincere congratulations！

As we all know， the leader plays an important role in the basketball team. Leading such a team， you’ll meet great challenges. But I think you can manage them， because you are not only hard-working but also you have a strong sense of responsibility. I believe this position will be a new beginning， and a chance for you to achieve more.

May all your wishes come true！

Yours truly，