短文改错 9期

（一）

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei

Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows， it’s famous 1. _______

mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _______

was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3. _______

the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 4. _______

climbed the mountain， we fed monkeys， visiting temples 5. _______

and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _______

since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 7. _______

Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at 8. _______

the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _______

the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep

at the moment my head touched the pillow. 10. _______

（二）

What should you do when your parents become 1. _______

angry？ If your parents got mad， try to have a conversation 2. _______

with them about it. Remembering not to shout 3. _______

at them. They usually will try to change， but they will 4. _______

take some time because they get angry all their life， and that 5. _______

is all they know. You might have to change for your 6. _______

method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your 7. _______

parents that they don’t expect―like cooking，

doing the dishes， washing clothes， or clean 8. _______

the floors. If this doesn’t work， bring in friend that you 9. _______

feel comfortable， and have him or her help you. 10. _______

（三）

Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young

people. According to studies， any children spend more time 1. _______

watching television than they spend in school. Because so 2. _______

much viewing， children may not be develop the habit of 3. _______

read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries 4. _______

much about the radio program young people listen to， 5. _______

although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder 6. _______

about the effects of television commercials. On one year the 7. _______

average child will see 25，000 television commercials， all 8. _______

planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want 9. _______

things that they don’t real need. 10. _______

（四）

When I first learned to write in English， I ran into 1. _______

many difficulties. The main problem was in that I 2. _______

always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything 3. _______

into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. 4. _______

I followed her advice and should put down 100 words 5. _______

or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _______

paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. 7. _______

One day I wrote a little story and showed to my 8. _______

teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. 9. _______

They all said the story was a good one. Their word were 10. _______

a great encouragement to me.

短文改错答案详解

（一）

1. famous 前加 a。mountain 为可数名词。又是第一次被谈及，故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。

2. 此行无错。

3. noon 后加 when。It was about noon 是主句，后面的应为从句，故在 noon 后加when，此处 when 意为“在……时候”。

4. them 改为 us。综观全文可知，此文是用第一人称的口吻来叙述的。

5. visiting 改为 visited。此处climbed，visited 和 told 构成并列谓语。

6. picture 改为 pictures。

7. passes 改为 passed。应与全文时态一致。

8. 删去 down。

9. and 改为 but。饭菜很贵不是一件令人愉快的事， 而服务质量很高确实是一件好事，故前后为转折关系。

10. 删去 at。the moment直接引导时间状语从句。

（二）

1. 此行无错。

2. got 改为get。通读全篇，可知道本文基本时态应为一般现在时。

3. Remembering 改为 Remember。本句为祈使句，表示建议，主语省略。

4. they 改为 it。they 前为转折连词 but，表明其后为一个句子，这里应用 it 代表前面整个句子。如：Tom’s mother kept telling him that he should study harder， but it didn’t help。此处的代词 it，代替“Tom’s mother kept telling him that he should study harder”这一句子的内容。

5. life 改为 lives。这是考查名词的数，life 是可数名词单数，句子主语用的是they，与其一致应用lives。

6. 删去 for。因为 change 作“改换”讲时为及物动词。如： Can you change me one yuan note？你能兑换一元零钱给我吗？而 change for作“转换车到……”解。如： Where should you change for Guilin？ 你在什么地方转车到桂林去？

7. any 改为 some。any 一般用于疑问句、否定句、条件从句中，而 some 一般用于肯定句中。此处为祈使肯定式，故用 some。

8. clean 改为 cleaning。应与 cooking， doing， washing 一致，作介词宾语。

9. friend 前加 a。friend 为普通可数名词单数， 其前应加不定冠词 a。

10. comfortable 后加 with。comfortable with 意为“与……自在/愉快”。例如：She feels comfortable with those who speaks English。她和讲英语的人谈话觉得很自在。

（三）

1. any 改为 many/some。根据句意，此处应表示“一些， 许多”，而 any 表示“一些”时，常常用于否定句、疑问句和条件句中。

2. Because 后面加 of。此处 so much viewing 相当于一个名词，故加 of。

3. 删去 be。此处 may not develop 已经构成谓语动词部分，be 属于多余。

4. read 改为 reading。of 为介词，后面需要接名词、代词、动名词作宾语。

5. program 改为 programs。program 为可数名词，且根据句意，此处应为复数概念。

6. noise 改为 noisy。noise 为名词，noisy 为形容词。此处应用形容词构成系表结构。

7. On 改为 In。根据上下文逻辑，此处意为“在一年中”。

8. 此行无错。

9. 删去第二个 to。make sb. do sth. 为固定搭配，意为“让某人做某事”。

10. real 改为really。此处应用副词修饰谓语动词 don’t need。

（四）

1. 此行无错。

2. 删去 in。根据句意及句子结构，此处为表语从句。

3. anything 改为 everything。此处为肯定句，anything 意为“任何一件事”，侧重个体；而 everything 意为“一切事情”，侧重整体。

4. my 改为 a。keep a diary 为固定短语，意为“记日记”。

5. 删去 should。and 连接两个并列的平行结构，前后时态均为一般过去时态。

6. talk 改为 talking。enjoy doing 为固定用法。故此处必须用动名词作宾语。

7. me 改为 myself。express oneself 为固定短语。

8. showed 后加 it。show 为及物动词，后面应接宾语。

9. reads 改为 read。and 连接两个并列的平行结构，前后时态均为一般过去时态。

10. word 改为 words。根据句意，此处应为“他们的话语，”用 words。