如何写读写任务中的主题句

时间:2022-10-30 08:04:28

如何写读写任务中的主题句

写任务中的第二部分,即发表看法这一部分的设置是十分灵活的,即以肯定、问题或关键词等方式呈现要点。出题者只提供一个框架和导向,具体的内容由考生来补全。因此这部分的段落结构是相当重要的。要在这部分文段中做到层次分明,条理清晰,就要写好每段的主题句,并将主题句放于段落的开头,使文章层次清晰,让阅卷老师一目了然。考生可以根据翻译法、问答法与过渡法去写每段的主题句。

一、翻译法

直接以一句话翻译该要点,作为该文段的主题句。要点以肯定的形式呈现的,考生可以遵循翻译法去写该段的主题句。

[例1]举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响;(2012广东高考要点2)

分析:该要点是以肯定的形式呈现的,因此考生可以遵循翻译法去写该段的主题句。

主题句:这让我想起了我的英语老师——Mandy, 在学习上她对我影响很大。

This reminds me of my English teacher, Mandy, who has influenced me a lot in my study.

参考范文:

This reminds me of my English teacher, Mandy, who has influenced me a lot in my study. Inspired by her,I followed her instructions step by step,and gained achievements consequently. It is she who has taught me the value of study as well as the importance of making progress.

[例2]以你的经历谈谈你和朋友相处的体会。(2012深圳一模要点3)

参考范文:

It reminds me of my experience of getting along with a girl who acted like Mary last year. At that time, other roommates took the same attitude to her as Jane to Mary. However, I helped her to realize that her behavior was improper and unacceptable. Then she changed and now we are living together happily.

[例3] 谈谈你自己或他人的一次团购经历。(2012惠州一模要点2)

参考范文:

It reminds me of my experience of group buying. Last week,I surfed a well-known group buying website for two film tickets. With only 30 yuan, I got the tickets as well as two bottles of green tea, which saved me so much. It was a very nice experience.

二、回答法

以一句话回答该要点,并将该句子作为该文段的主题句。要点以问题的形式呈现的,考生可以遵循回答法去写该段的主题句。

[例4]你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。(2010广东高考要点2)

分析:该要点是以问题的形式呈现的,因此考生可以遵循回答法来写这一要点的主题句。

主题句:我认为可以以下的方式更好地鼓励孩子学习。

From my point of view,we can encourage kids to study in the following ways.

参考范文:

From my point of view, we can encourage kids to study in the following ways. To begin with, schools are supposed to educate kids by teaching them to study for their family. Besides, some meaningful activities are expected to be held to enable the students to know the significance of study.

[例5]你对过节送礼如何理解?(2011深圳宝安区一模要点2)

参考范文:

From my own perspective, sending each other gifts in holidays is a good way to express love or care. To be exact,containing the giver’s genuine concern, the gift presented contributes greatly to enhancing the friendship between each other. In addition, presents for holidays can be meaningful as they are the symbol of festivals to some extent.

三、过渡法

即根据关键词的提示,考生自己编写一个围绕这个要点内容的过渡句来作为本段的主题句。要点以关键词的形式呈现的,考生可以遵循过渡法去写该段的主题句。

[例6]以约120个词讲述你(或你的朋友)为了帮助那些需要帮助的人筹集资金的经历,内容包括:

时间、地点和原因。(2012深圳名校高三调研要点一)

分析:要点以关键词的形式呈现的,考生可以遵循过渡法去写该段的主题句。

主题句:罗杰的故事让我想起了自己的经历。

Roger’s story reminds me of my own experience.

参考范文:

Roger’s story reminds me of my own experience. When I was a pupil,a student in our class fell ill. He was said to need a large sum of money to receive treatment. But unfortunately his family couldn’t afford the operation at all. As a consequence, all of us made a decision to collect some money for him.

[例7]请约120个词谈谈你对课本中植入广告的看法,包括如下要点:

你的看法。(2013湛江10月高三调研要点三)

参考范文:

As far as I am concerned, I disapprove of the action. To be specific, it, to some degree, does damage to the campus where students are being educated to form the right concept about the world. Moreover, it will more or less cause the students to buy the goods, which, in the long run, will drive them to develop an improper concept of the consuming.

[试题精选]

(2011年广东)以约120个词讲述一次你(或你的朋友)想家的经历,内容包括:

⑴ 时间、地点和起因;

⑵ 想家给学习和生活带来的影响;

⑶ 你(或你朋友)是如何应对的。

[原创练习]

1. 以约120个词讲述一次你(或你的朋友)好好利用一分钟的经历,包括:

(1)时间、地点和起因;

(2)谈谈好好利用一分钟给学习或生活带来的影响;

(3)你(或你的朋友)是如何应对学习时间不足的问题。

2. 以约120个词对向雷锋学习的现象进行议论,内容包括:

(1)你对向雷锋学习的现象的看法;

(2)你的父母(或其他长辈)是如何鼓励你向雷锋学习的;

(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励身边的人向雷锋学习?

参考范文

[试题精选]

In fact, in real life, everyone would have an experience of feeling homesick. I remember when I was 10 years old, I was sent to my uncle’s in another city because my parents were busy. There, I studied for two years. Although my uncle and his family were kind to me, I still felt homesick.

There is no denying/doubt that feeling homesick will cause endless awful effects in the aspects of my study and life. To start with, owing to the different teaching methods of different teachers, I found it difficult for me to understand the lesson. What’s worse, I often lost confidence because I didn’t adapt to the study atmosphere there.

In view of the seriousness of this problem, my priorities now should be focused on eliminating it in the following ways. First and foremost, I did my utmost to accept that place. What’s more, I did more exercises and paid special attention to my health. In addition, I spared no effort to communicate with my teachers as much as possible and turn to teachers for help when coming across difficult problems.

[原创练习]

1. In fact, in real life, everyone would have an experience of making use of a minute. I remembered yesterday, I came to school as early as before and successfully memorized 20 new words in a minute in the classroom before the first period in the morning.

There is no denying/doubt that making good use of a minute will cause endless positive effects in the aspects of my study. To start with, I can spare enough time to review my lessons and prepare for my college entrance examination. What’s more, I have the time to relax myself for a little while from the stressful study.

In view of the seriousness of this problem, my priorities now should be focused on solving it in the following ways. First and foremost, I must do my utmost to make the most of every minute during the time for break. What’s more, it would be better if I do pay special attention to the teachers during the class so that I don’t have to set aside some time to review what I learned in the class.

2. As far as I am concerned, learning from Lei Feng could be a mutually caring and benefiting act, which is the basis of the civilized society. Besides, lending a helping hand for no reward is actually an early form of volunteering.

I remember my parents often encourage me to learn from Lei Feng in the following ways. To start with, they always tell me some encouraging stories of them. Besides, they praise me every time I offer to help others.

The ways we encourage people around us to learn from Lei Feng can be listed as follows. First and foremost, we are urged to arouse people’s awareness of offering to help others. Moreover, we’re supposed to take the lead first to encourage more people to join us.

(作者单位:深圳市新安中学)

责任编校 蒋小青

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